Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
some of the people believe that internet and social world helps children to access to what they want easily, In my point of view new development of the world brings us disadvantages as well as advantages. Besides, most of the social medias main concepts are not suitable for the children age. I think that this statement is fundamentally correct; educating children is so difficult that past; and I want to reinforce my opinion from the following aspect.
The chief reason why I generally agree with the statement is that, virtually all of the social media contain a sexual and porn concepts which is not suitable to the children age and they can easily access to them just by clicking which make influence mentally and morally on children and avoid them to focus to their lessons. On the other hand, everyone can submit their own biased opinion about everything, actually there is no control on the truth and submitted material correct, so most of the times which unable us to research and use them because we couldn't show their validity.
Secondly, with all passing days, all of the parent works out side and they don't have any control to their child. What time they receive to home? How are their friends? And I think that parent can not devote enough time to their children to understand their problems and challenges, so it is the main reason why children spend most of their spare time behind their cellphones.
The last but not the least, currently the online games are very popular between the youngest, but could it have its current fame if parent allow their children to go out and find real friends. Again, because the parent lack of the present in the youngest life, they worried about the real world and prohibit their kinds to spend lots of time alone outside. Consequently, their phones are just a place that they can feel free and naturally they spend most of the time behind it and after their explore they could not have been focus on their lessons. Since based on a experiment the visual work makes brain tired more the physical exercises.
All in all, based on the reasons I presented above I generally agree with the statement and I think that lack of the time and the distraction which is occurred in the youngest mind are the main problems that children couldn’t concentrate to their lessons
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76296296296 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41901475256 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491358024691 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.7607677826 48.9658058833 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.785714286 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9285714286 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200781863779 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751652530371 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043991681807 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118210059752 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233421404931 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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