Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
technology develops and becomes complex, by the time goes on. it brings lots of modifications to the[M1] modern society, where those can be either positive or negative. One of the most important changes that the technology has applied to the societies, is predicting the future. it happens in identifying a job's condition in the future too, because it can help a person to make sure about the situation he would experience in the future, if he chooses a specific career. In this case, I want to oppose the idea made on the topic, and my disagreement comes up with two major reasons.
The first reason that I want to express is that, by the technology develops, more reliable sources could be created and historical documents are better preserved. Thus, it becomes easier for the person to pore over the background information about a job he wants to work on it. Also, he can access to other people's experiences in that case, easier. For instance, my brother wanted to choose the major for his academic studying in the university, and it became so easier for him, when he tried internet to look for the different aspects of the major he was interested in.
Secondly, I want to point out that, the jobs which are available now, are so various in type in comparing to the past times, and this variation can increase the rate of success in the future. What's more, people can easily chase their interests in the present time in comparing to the past times, because they can study and specialize in a specific field easier. For example, my father studied electrical engineering in the past, where it was so general for him about electricity. However, I am studying electrical telecommunication engineering, where focusing on just telecommunication subfield can help me expertise in that field. Hence, the chance of my success can be higher in comparing to my father, because I have a better concentration on my work.
having successful future in a career which people choose nowadays, is more possible in comparing to the past times. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that, it will become even more predictable for the people to see their career condition in the future. this is because, people have much more reliable sources to choose better, and have a better concentration on a specific field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8654822335 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84992720668 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505076142132 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2589090725 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.764705882 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143161622809 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466719289219 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04316094636 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864310142503 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022731970215 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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