Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every moments, a lot of great events occured around the world. They can be positive, such as advances in technologies, medicine, art festivals, or sprots competitions, or so negative and harmful such as war, extermination, terrorism, or crimes. It is so important for all to be concerned about them, and follow them. It is obvious, because we are not robot, or an dormant object, and should know events to manage our life. So I agree with the statement.
Firstly, It is one of humaness rule. As I mentioned, we are not robot, or an object. Sympathety is one of the characteristics which has make the world hospitable. poeple have to be concerned about each other and their planet. It should be noticed that our planet is in danger of extinction, and if people do not aware about it, it will deteriorate. For instance, global warming is major concern among all the people around the world, and most of the news discuss about it. Because of using fossil fuels, the rate of green gases is increasing, and the temprature is getting warmer which will culminate to bad events such as water deprivation, glacial melting, and animal extinction. Therefore, for solving this problem, people should be aware about its drawbacks, and how to change their habits. So merely by following news, people can be aware about it.
Besides, It helps us to be ready for preventing them. Every moments, news discusse about natural disasters or war around the world. So people can get information about them, and find solution for avoiding them. For instance, some countries in Middle East are involved to civil wars which has make difficulties and unsafety for their citizens. Govenmets and people can be aware about these problems to prevent them. Harsh earthquakes which can destroy every things, needs to organize some plans to parepare people for critical circumstances.
Furthermore, knowing about events around the world can provide great opportunity for trying hard for developing. Globalization has make people closer, and every moments, people can get information about advanceing technologies, or about new developments in science which can motivates, or inspire people to work harder for improving and more developments.
To sum up, it should be noticed that we are human, without concerning about races, religous, or politic. All of us are the same, and should be concern about other people around the world. If their problems happen to us, we will need their help, even their attention. So it is our duty to be aware about the events to gat ready for altering or solving the problms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s obvious, because we are not robot, or an dormant object, and should know events ...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Poeple
...cs which has make the world hospitable. poeple have to be concerned about each other a...
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Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'motivate'
Suggestion: motivate
...t new developments in science which can motivates, or inspire people to work harder for i...
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Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concerned'?
Suggestion: concerned
.... All of us are the same, and should be concern about other people around the world. If...
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Line 9, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their help, even their attention. So it is our duty to be aware about the events...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'for instance', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215568862275 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.151696606786 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0818363273453 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0219560878244 0.046263068375 47% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0738522954092 0.0685040099705 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12375249501 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0439121756487 0.0351676179071 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77309272593 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0299401197605 0.0309702414327 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00199600798403 0.00188951952338 106% => OK
Determiners: 0.0578842315369 0.0887237588012 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0319361277445 0.0209618222197 152% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119760479042 0.0139019557991 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2583.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 430.0 408.028673835 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00697674419 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.360465116279 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241860465116 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172093023256 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116279069767 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77309272593 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495348837209 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.3179434348 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5384615385 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5761472757 48.84282405 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3461538462 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.644075263715 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 40.7245080501 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.54838709677 1.45489161554 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360569056603 0.300154397459 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0665271269186 0.103427244359 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0573538551018 0.0752933317313 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.446197314577 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140968306398 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129599278782 0.114077575197 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662073438316 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.347827287326 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0901751093907 0.067059652881 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240093312153 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844057252515 0.0618886996521 136% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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