Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smartphone, video games, for fun and entertainment; Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children's development.
The proliferation of modern technology has made children increasingly prefer playing electronic devices like laptops and iPhones than playing outside with friends. However, if we consider the negative effects that spending excessive time on connected electronic devices can cause, playing plastic and wooden toys and simple games with their friends should be a better choice for children.
In childhood, playing toys and games with friends fosters team spirit, which plays a crucial role in careers. Children who play basketball together are able to learn how to cooperate with teammates to achieve a common goal. The ability to cooperate with others is exceptionally important for adults. Jack Ma, the founder of Alibaba and one of the wealthiest people in the world, created his company with 500,000 RMB raised by his close friends, some of whom worked together with Ma and became members of the management team of Alibaba. If Jack Ma played World of Warcraft from sunrise to sunset in his room and gained no team-working experiences when he was a child, would it still be possible for him to achieve such success?
Moreover, playing outside helps children keep a healthy lifestyle. Usually, outdoor games involve intensive body movements such as running and jumping. Children can build their body and enjoy the fresh air in these activities. On the contrary, spending time on electronic devices brings only negative ones. The radiation of screens can hurt children’s eyes and the incorrect body position can twist children’s backbones with constant strong pressure. Therefore, playing outside is obviously better than playing videos games and smartphones for children’s health.
At last, playing simple toys and games helps save a huge amount of money, which can then be used for children’s college study. Even though the technology is advanced nowadays, state-of-the-art electronic devices like the newest iPhone and Xbox are still relatively expensive for most families. Those families with children who prefer playing outside may save $10,000 or more by cutting the budget of buying newly released smartphones and computers. Consequently, they will have sufficient funds to support children’s college study in the future.
Just as what is demonstrated above, there are numerous reasons to let children play outside with friends rather than play video games in front of screens. If every parent could offer his or her children the opportunity to play freely and joyfully with their friends outside, our society will definitely benefit.
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- Some parents offer their school-age children money for each grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? 76
- Do you agree or disagree that students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past? 90
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45614035088 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83945410377 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588972431078 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4429584316 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.578947368 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35429932512 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117367324422 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740566488632 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216591976257 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304062600779 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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