Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is often considered as a bad quality for a person. However, some people think that it is a good quality for a person.
When facing an important decision like choosing which university he or she should go to and who he or she should marry, people react differently. Some people argue that it is better to take considerable time on considering such decisions while others disagree. From my point of view, spending time on deciding crucial things unarguably worth it because it helps people optimize interests and renders them reliable.
It is always wise to gather enough information before making any decisions. As more information is collected, the potential consequences that decisions may lead to become clearer. Jack Ma, the founder of Alibaba and one of the wealthiest people in the world, had conducted thorough analysis on the retailing business and even gone to the U.S. to look for insights in e-commerce before he devoted himself to Alibaba. If Ma entered the market with no knowledge about the Internet, he wouldn’t survive in the fierce competition in the e-commerce market of China. The quality of gathering information before making decisions makes Ma a successful entrepreneur. Therefore, it is not a waste of time to gather information before making any decisions and those who take relatively long time to analyze a choice of great importance usually make better decisions.
Moreover, spending time on collecting information before making decisions is a prerequisite of an outstanding person since generally speaking, those ones are careful about their choice and therefore not likely be blinded to the most beneficial option by complicated situation and distraction from others. Florence Nightingale, the founder of modern nursery, had faced a life-changing decision about how to save as many lives as she could in the battlefields of the Crimean War. She could go to the battlefield as a volunteer, raise money for wounded soldiers back in her hometown, or persuade the commanders of the English army to open hospitals that help take care of wounded soldiers. Every choice seemed to be a reasonable one but she hadn’t made her mind immediately based on her instinct until she found the most effective option. She analyzed mountainous archives and identified the major reason for the deaths of soldiers in the Crimean War, which was the serious infections after injury. Hence, she realized that opening hospitals in battlefields is the right choice. Then she devoted herself to the nursery in the battlefields and finally became the founder of modern nursery. If she made decisions without a second thought, would she save countless young lives in wars afterwards and achieve great success?
As the previous discussion has demonstrated, it is a self-evident truth that taking considerable time to decide on life-changing things enables people to make wise decisions and renders people outstanding. Hence, it is definitely an extraordinary quality for a person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
Suggestion: those
...anding person since generally speaking, those ones are careful about their choice and ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2422.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31140350877 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00618463254 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 776.7 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.410492745 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.473684211 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218946735818 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718986544532 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747119910131 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157984801932 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697060588214 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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