The university will spend money on dormitory to improve the life quality of students, which of the following do you think is the best way?
1)providing a room for quiet study
2)building an exercise room
3)providing entertainment place(watch film)
Even though the dormitory can be equipped with all kinds of facilities such as quiet room, exercise room, and movie theater as the dormitory is the major place where students live and study, providing a quiet room for study is the most effective and efficient way to utilize the money provided because of the numerous benefits offered by a quiet room.
A place where students can study quietly can help them cope with the great pressure from final exams. In universities, students usually struggle to find a place to review course contents at the end of the term. It is because the final exams, which decide the grades that students can get, is exceptionally crucial and everyone wants to have a place in libraries or classrooms so that they can prepare for the examinations quietly and efficiently. Therefore, if a room for quiet study can be provided in the dormitory, it will enable students to study conveniently and ultimately improve the life quality of students.
Moreover, providing a quiet room is relatively low-cost if compared to other options. A quiet room only needs facilities such as wooden tables, chairs, and carpets, which may only cost about 10,000 dollars. However, a qualified exercise room requires several running machines, mirrors, lifting machines, and so on and a movie theater needs a projector, a giant screen, and a number of comfortable chairs. The cost of building an exercise room or a movie theater may excess 100,000 dollars, which is almost unaffordable for the university. If the university choose to provide a quiet room, it will save a considerable amount of money for supporting underfunded students and purchasing books for libraries.
At last, a quiet room for study offers students a place outside the classroom to enhance their professional skills. Students are able to read career-related books and practice online tests in job applications in this room. Consequently, if the university provides a quiet room in the dorm, students who live here will have better chance to find jobs with high salaries at famous companies like Facebook and Morgan Stanley.
As what is demonstrated above, the benefits that a quiet room can bring clearly surpass those that an exercise room or an entertainment room like movie theater can bring. Hence, building a quiet room for study is the best choice for the university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07197943445 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80544357923 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498714652956 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7282571679 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.533333333 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9333333333 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33149270566 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123335329029 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777259922614 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200589473036 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466824822134 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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