Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that the parents today are more involved in their children's education than the parents in the past, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people strongly disagree with this thought. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts I believe that the parents today are more involved in their children's education today. This short essay will demonstrate some point regarding my point of view:
First of all, in my opinion it is widely understood that today the parents are more involved in their children's education. Today there is a high competition between the students. If the parent want to ensure the good education to their children, they have to put them in the best school. Eventually, they have to spend a lot of money to ensure that they provide all their children’s education requirements.
Another reason why I advocate that the parents today are more involved in their children's education is the technology development. The technology development provided many things that the children want to enjoy themselves with it instead of studying. If parents do not help their children to manage and control their time, the children will failed in the school.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the education material today developed and became harder that it was in the past. The are many assignments the children need to do as a homework and most of them should be found in the internet. The internet provide a lot of information so, the parent should help their children to find the most accurate and suitable information.
From what has been discussed above we may draw a conclusion which says, although the people whom have different opinions may have the right to believe in. But my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'fail'
Suggestion: fail
...d control their time, the children will failed in the school. Finally, it is a we...
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Line 8, column 127, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... became harder that it was in the past. The are many assignments the children need to d...
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Line 8, column 253, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
... be found in the internet. The internet provide a lot of information so, the parent sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99380804954 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68033865749 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495356037152 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2883626327 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.533333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399834022781 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140332082287 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122397730381 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21179465605 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130277292537 0.0645574589148 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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