Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Is keeping relations ship with old friend make us happier? or finding new friends make us less happy?... In my point of view this statement is fundamentally incorrect; maintaining old small group of friends makes us happier than the finding new ones; although some of the people says that because we know each other better, we can feel safe behind which is the key point of the being happy, I have different idea and I think that our friend group have few influences on our feeling. I want to reinforce my opinion from the following aspects.
The chief reasons why I generally disagree with the statement is that because our situations are changed during our life period, we need to change our friends. For example, we have a small group of friends in the school, but we get aware from each other when we go the university. All of us find new friends and spends lots of our time with them vividly for exchanging idea and practicing and improving our grads we have to meet and spend most of our spare time with them.
The latter reason why I generally disagree with the statement is that the main idea of the friend. We get friend with each other since we have any thing in common with them. Therefore, I think if we have lots of interests, it will be so natural to us to join in different groups of friends. For example, I have a small group of friends from my music class, other from university and other from cooking class. I cannot speak a lot about the cooking recipe with my friend in music class so on and so on. I feel happy when I have lots of friend with different idea and major. Moreover, it helps me to broad my view.
Last but not the least, having lots of friends gives us the opportunity to get help from them when we need. For example, two years ago, I need one place to go to my internship most of my friends say about the available positions on their work and I can easily discuss with the about the advantages and disadvantages of the positions, so I have a broad view when I chose my internship place.
In sum, with the passing day, we see ourselves in a different situation and should adapt themselves by finding new friends and relationships. Admittedly, if we find a good friend which can easy talk with about everything and keep our relation for a long time is good, but I don't think it bring happiness to us. Therefore, based on the reasons I mentioned above I partially disagree with the statement. I accept the first part, but the second part is not convincing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Or
...s ship with old friend make us happier? or finding new friends make us less happy?...
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Suggestion: some
...ier than the finding new ones; although some of the people says that because we know each o...
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Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...et friend with each other since we have any thing in common with them. Therefore, I think...
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Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of friends'.
Suggestion: lots of friends
... on and so on. I feel happy when I have lots of friend with different idea and major. Moreover...
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Suggestion: don't
...relation for a long time is good, but I dont think it bring happiness to us. Therefo...
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Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
... long time is good, but I dont think it bring happiness to us. Therefore, based on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45315904139 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48978337795 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453159041394 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.0832134292 48.9658058833 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.95 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222568998265 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853927911244 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535602204231 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143821231967 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466708245511 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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