Do you agree or disagree with the following statement
To be successful we must be creative
Every person has its preferred way to handle tasks at work or at school. But is being creative better than the traditional way? Some people may find that being creative is a little too risky since things may not work out as imagined. However, I agree that to be successful, we must be creative.
To begin with, most great inventions, which impact human beings’ lifestyle the most, come from creativity. It is these products of creativity let us live in a world that would be believed as another planet in hundreds of years ago. The most famous invention in recent years, for example, must be the iPhone. Before the iPhone, there were many generations of mobile phone. However, it is when iPhone’s created, our life started being changed so rapidly in a few years. With this totally new type of mobile phone, people can do anything anywhere. No one would say the iPhone is not a success. Without the creative people, the iPhone wouldn’t exist.
Secondly, to be creative let our brain see from a different perspective, let our heart be more open-minded to new ideas and let ourselves be more flexible to adapt to changes, resulting in lots of opportunities and solutions. I remember when I worked in a textile company, there’s one time, a customer gave us a new sample and hoped us to reach the same color effect which was not able to be made only by dyeing process but using special yarn. However, due to the cost issue, it was not possible to change materials. We were stuck on that point for several weeks until one day, our technician gave us an idea by trying different knitting way using the same quality yarn. We had never tried it since it sounded not practical at all. It just never came into our minds. In the end, it worked. Not 100% as what customer wanted, but within that price range and still having novelty, it’s perfect enough. It’s really a big success. If we were too conservative to try a new idea, we would end up having to drop that program.
To sum up, although trying creative way doesn’t mean it will always lead us to success. However, even though we fail, the experience is still a lot more precious than being conservative. Therefore, I believe that everyone should always try to think and look in a creative way, especially when having a tough problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...eople may find that being creative is a little bit too risky since things may not work out...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople, the iPhone wouldn't exist. Secondly, to be creative let our brain s...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a creative way" with adverb for "creative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...one should always try to think and look in a creative way, especially when having a tough problem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71078431373 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62589579377 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593137254902 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.1149718148 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.88 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.32 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.56 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299010249943 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795811815353 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850590045528 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190792754487 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590633810071 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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