Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Though some of the people keep the viewpoint that youngest have the most important influence on the all societies, in my point of view this statement is fundamentally correct; today’s the effect of the young people to their societies is virtually nothing' and I want to reinforce my opinion from the following aspects.
The first reason why I generally agree with statement is that based in the consensus the number of the youngest are decline in the last 50 decrease. Therefore, their influence to the societies are decrease. All ages have different needs from the society and because the number of the youngest reduce we rarely can aware with their needs. For instance, in the Europe most of the people and old, so it is natural that their decisions never match to the youngest mind and prospective.
The second reason why I generally disagree with the statement is that most of the families just have one child and spoiled it because they do everything to their one child, so because parent done everything to their children, they feel les self-confidence and depend to their parent in the most of their decisions. For example, I saw this condition in one of my university classmates. She asked ever thing from her parent and got their permission. Consequently, we never can suppose from a person by this characteristic to makes a change in the society where she can't decide for herself.
The last but not the least, leaders nearly in all of the countries are elders, naturally it would hard or in some cases impossible to them to understand and accept the youngest opinion. On the hand, nearly all of the member in most of the societies rely on the senior. Because their age, they think they would obtain good experience to understand and solve the problems.
In a nutshell, the belief and the condition in the societies enforce youngest to aware or some time squeeze out from the important decisions which clearly effects to their future. In sum, However, some of the people have different view than me, but based on the reasons I mentioned above I think that the youngest effect in the decisions which are effect to their future are nearly nothing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...makes a change in the society where she cant decide for herself. The last but not...
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...makes a change in the society where she cant decide for herself. The last but not...
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...e youngest opinion. On the hand, nearly all of the member in most of the societies rely on...
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...fects to their future. In sum, However, some of the people have different view than me, but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84139784946 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65744128085 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454301075269 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.319005234 48.9658058833 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.642857143 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201289733752 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671633103635 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061437748994 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119486886566 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737503322904 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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