Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives
time changes and as it evolves people evolve too. There might be an entire different reason why young people depend on their parents to make decisions for them. Lets take an example as a kid i was very stubborn, and most of the time i was allowed to take decision on my own, so obviously i wanted to do things my way so when it came to select a college for me, i wanted to go to the college where all my friends where going and my parents where against it as the college was not so reputed and they wanted me to study in a better college i fought with them regarding it but they told me if i wanted to be a computer graduate they would choose the college for me so i had to agree reluctantly but that was one of the best decisions in my life. initially i might have missed my friends but i got to learn so many things which my friends failed to do and later i scored better than any of them.
Its not necessary to make your own decisions every time, one can make their own decisions after discussing with the parents because they are much more experienced and have known life better than the youngsters. if they do not agree one can still try to make them understands our interests. Today making every decision on your might not secure your future, if you take a wrong step you might suffer for life be it making wrong friends or doing drugs or staying away just for the sake of freedom. making decisions when you talk might help a lot more than making a decision independently as we get to know the pro's and cons of it. And the effects of our decisions be it a good or bad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1335504886 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26144976892 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482084690554 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.151040249 48.9658058833 315% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.0 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1111111111 20.6045352989 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343221716233 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161749021919 0.076458572812 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105603515804 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265741127517 0.150856017488 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656695849244 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.27 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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