do you agree or disagree with this statement
life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children
In the ever changing fast pace world, everything is differ from previous day, since, sometimes it would be impossible for us to compare now with twenty years before; without doubt, technology is responsible for all of these changes. I personally do believe that life today is easier than it was for my grandparents. There are three main ideas to show why I have this preference.
First and foremost, in the past, everybody had to do all of one’s task, today by using of technology lots of machine have invented that make the life easier for us. Robots are just one of these innovations which help human beings to do all inconceivable work. We can say that even for paralyzed people everything are possible and disability somehow are disappeared. As an instance for my ninety- year old grandma is not easy to do her personal work such as cooking, cleaning, and shopping; but nursing robot make her possible to not to be dependent on none of her children.
Another prominent reason to support this idea is that public transportation or in general, transportation system have had significant changes. Long time ago people could not have even think about such a wonderful progress in transportation. Nowadays cars have all facilities to driving in comfort; from safety in dangerous situations to using two kinds of fuel in hybrid cars which all are using to provide us with an easier life.
Last but not least, internet and computer make life easier in an effective way. The social networks these days connect us to all over the world easily and enable us to be in relationship overseas just by a click on our smart phones even at midnight. These innovations are not comparable with for example fifty years ago when everything was done manual. To clarify this issue just think about posting letters. It was took about several days or even mounts to send a letter to your relatives in other cities but now it takes just a few minutes.
To sum up, technology are progressed with an unpredictable speed that its result is observable in all aspect of life from transportation to internet and robots which all make our lives easier than past.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2023-07-18 | M. MEHRABI KERMANI | 60 | view |
| 2023-06-04 | nph | 70 | view |
| 2023-04-17 | sadasr | 73 | view |
| 2023-04-05 | Dat_Nguyen | 70 | view |
| 2023-01-20 | theprasad | 71 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
...changing fast pace world, everything is differ from previous day, since, sometimes it ...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun machine seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of machines'.
Suggestion: lots of machines
...os;s task, today by using of technology lots of machine have invented that make the life easier...
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Line 2, column 385, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... somehow are disappeared. As an instance for my ninety- year old grandma is not e...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...ong time ago people could not have even think about such a wonderful progress in tran...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'wonderful progress'.
Suggestion: wonderful progress
...le could not have even think about such a wonderful progress in transportation. Nowadays cars have a...
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Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... internet and computer make life easier in an effective way. The social networks these days connect...
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Line 4, column 416, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ust think about posting letters. It was took about several days or even mounts to se...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'as for', 'as to', 'for example', 'in general', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225247524752 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.160891089109 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101485148515 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0544554455446 0.046263068375 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0519801980198 0.0685040099705 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136138613861 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0321782178218 0.0351676179071 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74680732179 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0445544554455 0.0309702414327 144% => OK
Particles: 0.00247524752475 0.00188951952338 131% => OK
Determiners: 0.0717821782178 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00742574257426 0.0209618222197 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123762376238 0.0139019557991 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2142.0 2387.08602151 90% => OK
No of words: 369.0 408.028673835 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80487804878 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.306233062331 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224932249322 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173441734417 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116531165312 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74680732179 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558265582656 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 62.8443829132 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0625 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5558415181 48.84282405 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.875 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 45.5557249322 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.47222222222 1.45489161554 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164534047303 0.300154397459 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0734384556391 0.103427244359 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0536630105675 0.0752933317313 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517046082434 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187193439541 0.151897553556 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695581224059 0.114077575197 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667867894728 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.250450431444 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0250813340728 0.067059652881 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11007923011 0.210909579961 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467398863856 0.0618886996521 76% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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