Do you agree or disagree? In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
It is critically important that accuracy is much needed to succeed in this modern age due to the austerity of the country.I personally believe that it is more essential to work rapidly and risk making a lot of mistakes.I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in my body paragraphs.
To begin with, numerous companies are highly competitive these days, which in turn have made a lot of employees adapt to faster working conditions.In fact, some even hire machineries in order to defeat their oppositions because the sole aim of any business is to maximize profit.My own experience is a compelling example of this.Four years ago,I was opportuned to work in a pharmaceutical company where we had to make vaccines in order to minimize the control of the coronavirus.During our production, we detected some flaws while testing the vaccine, but because we always want to be at the top of our game at all times we had to put the vaccines in the market so as not to disappoint our customers and we ended up correcting the subsequent batches. However, our opposition companies who are also producing the same drugs encounter such mistakes, and because they were trying to be faultless with their production, this actually made them lose customers.Also, people stop getting any of their products because of the disappointment encountered with their vaccines.If they had put the products in market at that time they were trying to be a perfectionist they wouldn't have experienced extinction.For this reason, it is certainly clear to see why it's much helpful to be speedy in doing things.
Furthermore, the widespread use of technology is another cogent factor, which has made people process their work much faster. To be more specific, there are a myriad of tools that people use to perform a plethora of tasks.For instance, twenty years ago, there was no centralized banking and due to the cumbersome data that the bankers need to put down this eventually resulted in a lot of errors such that so many working class lost their money.However, the modern technology has automatically serve as bulwark to people because,it is much convenient to carry out operation at one's freewill.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I believe that trying to perform operations quickly and taking risks to commit flaws is better. This is because it makes one stay firm in the job market, and also the prevalence of technology has also helped in controlling risk to some extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance, i feel, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9734939759 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98651345092 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549397590361 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.1344086022 293% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 225.617791309 48.9658058833 461% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 294.857142857 100.406767564 294% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.2857142857 20.6045352989 288% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5714285714 5.45110844103 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120013957062 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655896982186 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371997372827 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882826361947 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035728916989 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.6 11.7677419355 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 58.1214874552 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 10.1575268817 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.01818996416 132% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.0537634409 255% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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