Do you agree or disagree?
The rules that society today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Throughout history, human being always have tried to find the best way for improving the society and elevate the welfare, which among of these ways rules play a key role in the human's life, especially for young people. In this regards, todays, society expect to follow all the rules by young people even they are too strict. As far as I am concerned, young people should following all the rules, which they make in the societies. In the following paragraph, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
First, in the modern world, the advancement of technology has bad impacts on the youth that have controlled by the some policies. To put it in other words, the invention of some high technologies such as smartphones, electrical devices, and computers let to using these tools in the bad way. For example, I remember when I was a university student I had a problematic course that was related to mechanical engineering science and our class had a great quite atmosphere, since there were some policies in our college for banding the use of mobile phones and electrical devices in the class. At the end of semester, I could pass this course based on this condition. Thus, if I had not followed the university’s rules, I would not be able to pass my course.
Second, nowadays, there are many ways to improve the responsibility of the young people in the society, and making the rules has challenged more than others. To be more specific, if young people and children obey the law in all situation, they can enhance their responsibility and gain a lot of experience for the future. For instance, once when I was a student I should did my math homework based on professor's guideline. After many attempts, I could do my best, and finally I have been successful. Now, I have been a good planer, and I have a huge company. As a result, had I not respected to the rules, I would not be capable of in a high-level position now.
In conclusion, apart from what was mentioned above, there are several others reasons for which I subscribe the idea that it is better for young people to follow the rules that make by society. Thus, not only does it help the youth to improve their responsibility, but also it can control the negative effects of technology to pave the way for the future success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'professors'' or 'professor's'?
Suggestion: professors'; professor's
... I should did my math homework based on professors guideline. After many attempts, I could...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66256157635 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76110132134 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527093596059 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4498133231 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.352941176 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8823529412 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190481627109 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634058843289 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971916499553 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118946744971 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947513340631 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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