Do you agree or disagree?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Thought history, it is crystal clear that select the best way to reach success has been a vital point in the human being life. In this regard, young people is one of the most important groups to find great persons for imitating the character and personality in their life. As far as I am concerned, the opinions of celebrities and famous persons are really considerable for young people. In the following paragraph, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
First, famous persons such as athletes and casts have many fantastic characters for young people because of the lifestyle of many celebrities are dramatically luxury and spectacular view. Obviously, young people and children imitate these persons and imagine their successes based on celebrates’ life. For example, I remember when I was a university student at one of the best university in our country, the University of Tehran, one of my professors had a fantastic character. To do so, I really eager to copy all the important characters and his opinions to assign my life. Now, I am a great personality and position in society. Thus, if I had not selected my professor as my lifestyle pattern, I would not be able to be a successful person.
Second, as a matter of fact, celebrates and famous persons are really good planer and they have an important role in society that people usually want to have the same personality. To put in other words, the life of the famous persons are full of wealth and facilities. To this end, young people and children want to gain the best condition in their life. For instance, again, I remember when I was a student I have a rich professor and he had a huge company. To do so, I decided to copy his lifestyle. Now, I have a tremendous company and I am a rich person. As a result, if I had not used to a good copy of my personal life, I would not be able to reach a lot of money.
In conclusion, apart from what was mention above, several reasons subscribe to the idea that the opinions of famous persons are more important to younger people. Thus, not only characteristics but also the lifestyle of celebrities and famous persons have a key role in young people.
- Summary 3
- Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage. 3
- Do you agree or disagree?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with this statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 76
- Do you agree or disagree?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ersons have a key role in young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64935064935 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81548856884 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1882375701 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2105263158 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2631578947 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36842105263 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139295012702 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479024289241 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545207631247 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106590546838 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466691673553 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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