Do you prefer long-term trips or short-term trips?
Traveling is a experience that everybody loves. There are persons who like to spend a lot of time in a traveling experience while others prefer to have a short-term experience. Personally, I include myself in the second group since I prefer a more intense traveling experience and also I would probably not enjoy to stay too much time far away from my routine.
Some might say that it is better to spend a lot of time on the road. In this sense, there is people who likes to have long-term travels where they can have plenty of time to discover places and cultures. People who enjoys long travels tends to say that by this way they can have an utter experience and at the same time they might be having a unique experience considering there is a small probability to comeback for some places. Thus, more time means a better trip.
While I believe this is a fair argument, personally I find more attractive to have short-term travels. By this way it's possible to have a more intense experience where it's possible to spend a lot of energy exploring places in a couple of days. A lot of time on the road tends to transform the trip into something boring since we tend to get tired with the amount of time outside home. In this context, quantity doesn't not mean quality in traveling. Even considering that the place visited might be amazing and with a lot things to do, it's possible to come back to a next adventure. I don't think it's necessary to have a "now or never" approach when exploring and meeting a new place. After all, If you liked it, you might come back.
Moreover, it's not attracting to be away from my routine and habits for a long time. While there is persons who doesn't care to spend some time without have any routine there is persons who also miss their routine after spend some time without it. In this sense, long-term trips might represent stay away from the comfortable of our homes and also make us stay away from daily activities that we might like to do everyday like go to the gym, play sports or hang out with close friends.
In conclusion, one can say there is interesting arguments that favors long-term travelings. However, there is a plethora of personal tastes and some people might prefer to not spend a lot of time far away from home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy staying'.
Suggestion: enjoy staying
...xperience and also I would probably not enjoy to stay too much time far away from my routine....
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Message: Did you mean 'to come back'?
Suggestion: to come back
...onsidering there is a small probability to comeback for some places. Thus, more time means ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...outside home. In this context, quantity doesnt not mean quality in traveling. Even con...
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Suggestion: don't
...ble to come back to a next adventure. I dont think its necessary to have a 'now...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...d it, you might come back. Moreover, its not attracting to be away from my routi...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are persons'?
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...utine and habits for a long time. While there is persons who doesnt care to spend some time with...
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: Did you mean 'there are persons'?
Suggestion: there are persons
...pend some time without have any routine there is persons who also miss their routine after spend...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are interesting arguments'?
Suggestion: there are interesting arguments
...friends. In conclusion, one can say there is interesting arguments that favors long-term travelings. Howev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, after all, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53753026634 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48055361443 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46004842615 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2042794118 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6315789474 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185593347129 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626882490969 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613740689109 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113634780031 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112183199199 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.