Effect of Obesity on the Body
The key health problem is that overweight is harmful for bodies. According to the World Health Organization, " Overweight and obesity are defined as abnormal or excess fat accumulation that may impair health." Actually, overweight and obesity have different definitions. Overweight may be due to fat, water, and muscle in the body. On the other hand, obesity often because of fat only (NIDDK.) Worldwide obesity has nearly tripled since 1985. Historically, Chronic shortage of food and malnutrition had been lesioning of humans from the long period of time. After that, the initial effect for increasing obesity rate is technological advances which did a gradual increase in food supply to became available. Even though, these technological results have evolved, the effect of cumulative food since the Second world war, with reduced physical activity explain increases in obesity (Section). To quote Allison Cox, "Weight gain in Britain is the second largest cause of cancer after smoking, and most people do not know anything about this risk, if they know the link, it will protect all generations, not just the millennium generation, from cancer." Health awareness is significant for keeping people on a healthy state.
Currently, obesity is spreading around the world. Nowadays, obesity is well known public health problem, but it is considered as new issue because it started few decades ago. According to The National Center for Health Statistics estimates that, for 2015-2016 in the U.S.’’39.8% of adults aged 20 and over were obese (including 7.6% with severe obesity) and that another 31.8% were overweight.’’ There are a lot of reasons why obesity is not solved. Frist, if people still watching TV until midnight, they will eat a lot of snakes that has a lot of sugar, that means more extra fat in their body. Second, life gives people more stress that will open their appetite. third, some medications cause people overfat cause people to gain weight.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... been lesioning of humans from the long period of time. After that, the initial effect for inc...
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Line 1, column 1239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for keeping people on a healthy state. Currently, obesity is spreading around t...
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Line 3, column 685, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Third
...e stress that will open their appetite. third, some medications cause people overfat ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, second, so, still, third, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33544303797 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00018693003 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623417721519 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.6625854563 48.9658058833 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199400105178 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706743999884 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683878502503 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158106280246 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260776461268 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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