Factors influencing making major purchase

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Factors influencing making major purchase

Currently, society has witnessed an unprecedented accumulation of material affluence, therefore we citizens are offered with multiple choices and have the increasing purchasing power to make a bunch of major purchases. However, when it comes to deciding the item we want to buy, we are interrupted with varieties of information, like recommendations from friends, the information from media or suggestions from a salesperson in the store. Personally speaking, when I am making the decision to purchase major affairs, I prefer to take recommendations from friends into my consideration and there are a couple of reasons to account for my view.
To start with, the information from friends or colleagues are more trustworthy. When we are seeking information about these products, they tend to reach out their hands and tell us their true feeling of utilizing these merchandises, like the products’ quality, cost or some other specific details which we usually ignore. Therefore, we are equipped with a large amount of information to make a diligent decision. In contrast, provided that we amass information from the salesperson in the store, due to their characters, what they tell us are all products’ perks, instead of telling us both the pros and cons to help us make an all-round evaluation, which apparently prevents us from evaluating the comprehensive quality of these products. The research conducted to evaluate individuals’ satisfaction of their purchases demonstrates that the citizens making their decisions based on the information offered by their friends or colleagues are more pleased with what they purchased. Conversely, other individuals persuaded by the salesman to buy specific products end up regretting. This research illuminates that making decisions based on the information rendered by familiar persons provides us with more satisfying experience in purchasing.
What’s more, the information offered by friends is much more detailed. To be more specific, since friends and colleagues are familiar with our characteristics and habits, they are capable of rendering some information in accordance with those properties, which is of crucial significance. Compared to it, the information from the media is geared toward all the readers, hence, this information is likely to inapplicable for us. For instance, I used to make my major purchase decisions according to the information I had amassed from magazines, however, I eventually found that those products not only failed to accommodate my needs but also wasted me a lot of money. After realizing the reality, I tend to ask my friends for help in regard of purchasing major merchandises, which absolutely elevates my satisfaction of what I purchase and enables me to reckon that what I buy is a money well spent.
Admittedly, collecting information from different sources has its perks, for instance, we can have a comprehensive understanding of the quality of the products by reading the information displayed on TV or other media. Nevertheless, since all of these pieces of information origin from some individuals unfamiliar with us, what they suggest is not worthy of trust.
In a nutshell, from what has been discussed above, obtaining some information or recommendation from friends or colleagues is the optimal approach to decide which major products we ought to purchase, which prevents us from having unfavorable purchasing experience.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, conversely, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, in contrast, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 52.1666666667 176% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 8.0752688172 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2910.0 1977.66487455 147% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46992481203 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31490065321 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479323308271 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 914.4 618.680645161 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0258329758 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.666666667 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130400119452 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537683162334 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063478642484 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878780989527 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552156919483 0.0645574589148 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 11.7677419355 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 58.1214874552 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 86.8835125448 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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