Has the ease of the cooking improved life?
There is no denying to the fact that food is one the most primary necessities for the human. During the centuries, people are always seeking to find food, and a large crowd has suffered from diverse disease due to the shortage of food, and sometimes this issue ends up with death. Fortunately, we live in an era of time that the topic of food has been solved in many countries so that a plethora of people are in the conviction that life gets improved due to readily available to food storage. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that this issue is still a matter of concern in some regions. I am of the opinion that each point of view has their own merits and drawbacks, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, food issues are continuously developed along with progress in other fields. Undoubtedly, advanced technology has a crucial role in this regard. Thanks to the modern cooking methods, growing the fresh and nutrition ingredients not only make the process of preparing the food much easier but also help the people to be far healthier. In addition, there are different devices and methods in order to preserve the food in the best possible quality that is an absolute relief for many people. Furthermore, cooking is kind of entertainment for many people. They have mixed different ingredient and make delicious food. In fact, the cooking becomes a popular industry that lots of people have been drawn to it hoping to experience the better life.
Another vital fact that should be taken into consideration is that rapid changes and complexity of today's world present new challenges and put new demands on different societies. Poverty is still one of the critical obstacles in some undeveloped countries. In Africa, numerous kids have died as food is unreachable for them. In many South America countries, people commit various crimes because they are dying owing to starve. Furthermore, drastic statistics are shown that these poor countries have mostly possessed rich resources of oil and gas, and this adversity has been imposed due to excessive greed of others developed countries to reach their lucrativeا resources.
On the basis of the point mentioned above, I am convinced that food is a controversial debate that has two distinct impacts on people's life. For some of them becomes the tool of enjoying more from their life, and for the rest is the main driver for dealing with endless miseries. Therefore, it is a duty of each individual, as a human, not to allow this inequity continues in the world.
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- TPO 12 - Jane Austen Portrait 81
- TPO 16 - 88
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- TPO 3 - Integrated:Rembrandt portrait -the woman with fur collar- 93
- A/D: Parents should give school-age children money as reward for getting a high mark in their schools. 70
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24375 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.1625 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108333333333 0.0866891130778 125% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0458333333333 0.046263068375 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.025 0.0685040099705 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135416666667 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0541666666667 0.0351676179071 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.674085049 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03125 0.0309702414327 101% => OK
Particles: 0.00208333333333 0.00188951952338 110% => OK
Determiners: 0.10625 0.0887237588012 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00416666666667 0.0209618222197 20% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00833333333333 0.0139019557991 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2603.0 2387.08602151 109% => OK
No of words: 439.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92938496583 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339407744875 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271070615034 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173120728929 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129840546697 0.112833075102 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.674085049 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558086560364 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 66.4706680506 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.95 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3372477305 48.84282405 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.15 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.95 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 49.0570615034 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.85714285714 1.45489161554 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381784465981 0.300154397459 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0836291762917 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0598580831447 0.0752933317313 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.477938716036 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157066304399 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14593322921 0.114077575197 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116539476659 0.0781384742642 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.406448087385 0.336927656856 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.120859719894 0.067059652881 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289667610902 0.210909579961 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108371852791 0.0618886996521 175% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.