Important to keep old friends than new friends. Do you agree or disagree?
There are some things that we can share with old friends and but there are some issues which we love to share with our new mates. There are certainly some benefits and drawbacks when new friends come into our lives. So, in my opinion, I would contradict with my statement because I believe that we should have all types of friends, but the most important quality of friendship should be honesty and sincerity.
An individual is considered a friend if they stand on the same opinion. If the opinion differs it should not matter to a friend. I believe, that in friendship there shouldn't be any superiority. If there is hypocrisy in friendship it will not last for long. For instance, my old friend was in trouble and she wanted an opinion on a particular issue. She asked me for a piece of advice. I passed it on to her she agreed to it and tried to solve her problem with the piece of advice which I gave it to her. She was happy that within no time she was able to solve her problem. When we have new friends issue in life won't work. Because they are new and their thoughts might be different. A new will consider you a friend but she may ignore my advice. Moreover, she may even show some superiority she may feel that she doesn't need any advice from me.
In friendship, we always need some sincerity. Friendships don't exist if there is no sincerity. For example, I failed in my exam. I wanted some help from my friend. I shared my problem with both types of friends. My new mate assured me of helping me in my exam but at the same time she was talking behind my back and sharing my issues with someone else.I felt bad because she was not sincere to me. At the same time, an old friend helped me and kept on word that she will not share my issue with anyone else.
Therefore, I believe that in friendship sincerity and honesty play a very important role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37249283668 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35804955374 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464183381089 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6419125182 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.347826087 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1739130435 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4347826087 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146412838865 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495453620539 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456259214847 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928567254259 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361373819864 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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