Is truth important? Agree or disagree?
There are many relations in this world like parents, husband, and friends. These relationships can exist or can be destroyed by telling the truth in either way. However, some believe that telling truth is an important consideration when we are hooked in relation and some oppose on this stating that it's not important. In my opinion, sincerity plays a very important role because you will be always respected and also there will be trust in a relationship.
We are always loved by our loved ones. Our loved ones expect from us that we should be sincere to them. For instance, there are many kids around attend high school. One of the kids has started using drugs. At home, he was warned that he should be away from such habits but unfortunately, he met a group of friends who love taking drugs and are spreading this around the school. However, after a couple of days, they were caught and the parents were called. If the kid was sincere to his parents he would have shared with his family. When his parents spoke to him on this matter he said that when they don't speak the truth then why should he. So, I believe that it should come from the genes. If we are sincere the kids will be sincere.
The truth may result in failure in a relationship too. Some people lie about truth because it may lead to many consequences. For example, my sister was pregnant and was in the ninth month of her pregnancy, There was an incident happened in her house. She lost her husband in an accident. I was not able to tell her the truth because I was scared that she will go in a shock. I had to lie to her about her husband. However, By the end of the day, she got the news from an outsider about the death of her husband in an accident. As a result, she went in coma. So here truth lead to a bad consequence in her life.
Therefore telling the truth is very important because there will be peace and harmony in a relationship. I believe that there should not be any barriers in life because of truth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 385, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will always be
...plays a very important role because you will be always respected and also there will be trust ...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ere caught and the parents were called. If the kid was sincere to his parents he w...
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Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...m on this matter he said that when they dont speak the truth then why should he. So,...
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Line 3, column 693, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eve that it should come from the genes. If we are sincere the kids will be sincere...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ad to a bad consequence in her life. Therefore telling the truth is very important bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38274932615 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39036603843 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495956873315 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0018104832 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.04 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.84 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.12 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126252215812 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394005467561 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535044063042 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102808881899 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626041257862 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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