It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Throughout history human beings have been eager to learn knowledge. Some people may hold the view that having an extensive knowledge of many academic subjects is better than to experts in one especial subject. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that being specialist in one subject is preferable. From my own perspective, the latter belief is true. In what follows, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my standpoint is concerned with this issue that there are better job opportunities for a specialist. It is the fact that, nowadays, companies producing a product or providing a service are inclined to hire experts in their companies. Since it would decrease the cost of training new employees to being experts in their work.Hence, the one, having expertise in on area of his filed, has more opportunity. For example, I, after graduating, searching for a job. Once I was invited to a job interview, there are a myriad of applicants most of whom were industrial engineering as me. The company wanted to hire a person in the quality control section, who were able to apply the software’s of this field. It was not of importance to know other fields of industrial engineering like project control, production expert and so forth. The more one be expert in one subject, the more he has the chance to get a decent job.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that Studying at a specific subject prepare condition for one to learn in depth. As there is a one subject to be learned, one has a lot of time to spend on learning it. therefore, he can allocate his time on learning and studying all aspects of the subject. Besides, he has not to speed his path to learn fast. He can read a myriad of materials, books to boost himself. In addition, he can do some practical part time jobs in companies which are related to his field to learn it better. For example, a civil engineering just focus on the drawing software such as auto cad and anything associated with structures like buildings, bridges and so on. For, drawing is his first and the most important part of his work. He should be learning it in depth and it is sufficient for him to be specialist in drawing. As a result, learning a subject allow one to learn it in depth.
In conclusion, this is my deep belief that not only is studying one subject prepares good job opportunities, but also it brings about learning profoundly. Therefore, I highly suggest that it would be better to be a specialist in one subject.
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- To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors. 70
- Some people offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. 60
- It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ job than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind substantiating'.
Suggestion: mind substantiating
...ng reasons. The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my standpoint is concerned with this is...
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Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ned to hire experts in their companies. Since it would decrease the cost of training ...
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Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...mployees to being experts in their work.Hence, the one, having expertise in on area o...
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Line 2, column 558, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...invited to a job interview, there are a myriad of applicants most of whom were industr...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
..., he has not to speed his path to learn fast. He can read a myriad of materials, boo...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
.... In addition, he can do some practical part time jobs in companies which are related to ...
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Line 3, column 528, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...ch are related to his field to learn it better. For example, a civil engineering just ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72444444444 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80130128492 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.581437916 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.04 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.12 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26106008008 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743357376702 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109935135609 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185750905021 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918544009341 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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