It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise?
People have other choices to make them relax after long and stressful hours of working hard at company. Many like to just sit one place and enjoy movie or read a book. But personally, I prefer to do some activities on free time. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, it is clearly that doing exercises will improve your health much better than just sit still at one place. Moreover, you really feel comfortable and your stress goes out when you chat with someone, meanwhile you are doing some activities at gyms. Additionally, stretching out your body is always very effective on refreshing your mind from working. My own experience is an example of what I mean. When I just started working at Samsung company three years ago, I felt very stressful with a big load of work, which I had to solve every day and because I was a new staff, who wanted to express myself to my boss that I was an enthusiastic and hardworking employee, therefore, I always came back home with extremely exhausted feeling. In order to make my mood better, I spent a half of hour at the park near my house to run, jump and do some light body stretching. Thanks to these, I felt so much energy and my working spirit was high up every time after running. Furthermore, after two years doing regular exercises, my health has been improved better without backpain from sitting long hours in front of desk.
Secondly, combining between leisure activities and physical exercises is very wisdom to save your time. Everyone has only 24 hours a day to solve all their jobs and especially young people like me feel not enough time to go to gyms for exercises. Therefore, it would be perfect when you not only improve your health but also feel relaxed. For example, when running outside the park, it helped my stress go out and it saved my time on watching tv for nothing but looking humorous stuffs. Even you read a book, it also took you at least one or more hours to just sit at one place, and then you still need to go to do some activities to make your body less tired.
In conclusion, I think going to gyms or going outside is better than just watching tv or reading a book when you want to do somethings on your leisure time. Because it will help your health better and because it is effective to save your time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, i feel, i mean, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47319347319 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3876792654 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517482517483 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5538152633 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5789473684 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94736842105 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195644352261 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612990402455 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712431291543 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135351729357 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462902066234 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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