It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise?
Nowadays, people live in hotchpots universe, they face with different challenges. In order to retrieve their energy, they have to find a way to relax and do some activities to drain away the tensions and stresses they endure during the day, for this reason they have different options, some may stay at home watch a movie or read a book other may prefer to do some physical exercises, personally think doing physical exercise is better option for they fallowing reasons that would be explained in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, doing exercise can help our physical health. In this situation we can take advantage of healthy and strong muscles that could help us in doing our daily staffs including; going to work, university etc. with the help of strong body we can work more and manage our challenges without being tired, so our productivity would be increased because of our increased abilities. Otherwise, people who don’t regular exercise usually get tired easily. For example;
Secondly, physical exercise can increase our mental health. Because when wo do exercise some hormones including endorphin released that is directly associate with a Sens of happiness, which help us relax and retrieve energy. For example, I remember when i was student at university, I used to work at library, at same time l took a part in basketball gym. I remember when i play basketball I usually became happy after the sport in compare those days i didn’t play sports i didn’t have that feeling as well.
Finally, it seems to that doing exercise can be an excellent choice to relax because it help us not only to improve our physical health, but also to improve our mental health.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Playing sports teaches people important lessons about life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96466431095 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59674283111 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.688784902 48.9658058833 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.727272727 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245163174688 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857833320993 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904760750782 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142701066835 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671556017336 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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