It is easier to be well educated today than it is in the past
As we all know that education is the key of people to start a happiness life and success career. Obviously, in the journey of pursing better education, nowadays people have much more ways to attain it than the past due to the emerge of internet and the improved economy.
Indeed, nowadays people can learn almost anything they want any place and any time once they connect to the internet. If you want to learn English from the native speaker, just searching from some related website and after a few clicks, you will find your perfect teacher to teach you who might leave a thousand miles away, still you can learn from her easily and effectively. Plus, studying from the internet will save you tons of time on traffic jam and commuter times. In the past, you can never find a good teacher that fit for you in such easy way, since the information is rare, you might need to find them through newspaper advertisement or ask many friend who know someone can teach you. When I was young, my mother want to find a new piano teacher since my old one go to abroad, however, it is very hard for my mom to find a proper one to teach me, believe it or not I ended up stop playing it. What a shame, if my mon could use internet find me a teacher 20 years ago, it is might be a different story for me. The rapid development of internet provides people more chances and rights to enjoy the joy of learning and get well-education.
Obviously, recently people’s economic status is getting better and better, therefore more and more people can afford the tuition of university, according to a survey from the Chinese education institution, the number of student of universities in China has increased three times than before while compares to 20 years ago. The higher education will give students more professional knowledge and skills which plays huge impact on their future career. When my mother was young she is very smart with good grades, unfortunately as a single-family child, she need to earn money as soon as possible to support her mother, so she went to accounting school instead of university. Even so many years past, she still feels pity that she can’t went to the college. As my mother always said, “education is the best gift that parents can give their children.” Supporting me to study in college to attain well- education is the best gift she gave to me. I feel so luck nowadays I have more chances to choose better education than before.
All in all, as the reason I listed above, it is obviously that people can get well-education than before through the power of internet and better economic environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... ways to attain it than the past due to the emerge of internet and the improved economy. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 654, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'many friends'.
Suggestion: many friends
... through newspaper advertisement or ask many friend who know someone can teach you. When I ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1016, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... nowadays I have more chances to choose better education than before. All in all, a...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, even so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67596566524 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62481442353 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532188841202 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3794274161 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.1875 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.125 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139142202283 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516925268796 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458157739004 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106422063817 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436894972453 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.