It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
It is apparent that nowadays the omnipresent place, which becomes the majority of people’s part in their lives and everyone may be familiar with or always go there, is Supermarket or shopping center because it provides a variety of things that suits for every type of people such as Fashion, Entertainment, Technology, and food etc. So, It has been widespread in almost every areas in the countries over a period, because of Its modern and necessity while some people oppose to not build this one nearby their hometown, But I strongly believe that it should be nearby our hometown for some reasons which I will elucidate in this essay.
First and foremost, some people may have trouble going to Supermarket for some reasons, for example, which is far away from their home. As a result ,It takes much more fuel to reach there if they use cars or any other vehicles that use an engine. It is not worth to add more payment in this case.
I will bring my friend’s case as my example, Our supermarket in our city is 12 km away from our school after our school was finished, We decided to throw a party at my friend’s home but we had no pork for the barbeque. Finally, I and my friend had to go to the supermarket on the way,
His car suddenly ran out of fuel, So we lost some of our budgets to fill up the fuel. Because we had a tight budget for this party consequently we got a few ingredients for this party.
Therefore, Building a supermarket close to our homework provides more convenience of traveling
And It could save more money than going so far shopping center.
Secondly, If there is a new business in our hometown, what is going to happen after then? Of course, It is going to recruit new staffs to work in there. So It is a big opportunity for those who are out of a job in our hometown and consequently, it can accelerate the growth of the economy in there as well. It seems like they both mutually get benefits. For example, If the neighbors in that village work for that supermarket and then they get the salary from that and there is only one supermarket in that place. After all, they will definitely buy the necessary things in there by that salary It’s like a loop, as a consequence, It will lead to expansion or upgrade their business.
To sum up, I support that point that supermarket should be built nearby neighbor for the reason that It is more convenient and save the budget, Next it is a good chance for getting the job which provided in there and it also can boost the area of neighbor’s economy up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, after all, for example, of course, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49462365591 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64764635431 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501075268817 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3489162204 48.9658058833 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.625 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0625 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814000828567 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268122624689 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311420360942 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420108657338 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038188658332 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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