It is more important to keep our old friends than it is to make new ones
There is no shortage of debate about whether to keep our old friends than to make new friends. In my opinion, I strongly believe that it is more important to keep our old friedns than it is to make new ones. I believe this way because of three main reasons which I am going to discuss in the following essay.
Firstly, one of the main reason why it is more to keep old friends is because they know us very well and have taken part in our emotions. They know about our family, interactedwith our relatives and friends and have become a family. They know when we are sad and happy and have shared our feelings as theirs. My own personal experience is a complelling example of this. I have some school friends of mine who have become so close with my parents too. They look up to me and become happy and proud when I achieve great things in life and sad whenever things does not go well as I expected and failed. Hence, I strongly believe that they are more important than new friends.
Secondly, they had been in my harder situations in life when even family members were not and they even continue to remain the same. They have helped me in situations when I thought no one could help. My school friends even raised a significant amount of money for my father's surgery when my father underwent a kidney stone operation. I felt helpless at that time because no one helped me but my friends. Had they not contributed those finances, it would had been a neck wreck situation to me and should have sold my family assests. But that did not happen because of them. Hence, it cannot be put in words their importance in my life.
Finally, they are the main reasons why my childhood is happy and still memorable. We had a great joy in school days with full of fun and jokes all day. We used to play games in our homes after school gets over. We even made fun of people we dont like. There was a momentary situation in our school's annual day in which we participated in mockeries and dramas on stage which was my favourite event in my life. Thus, they are more imprtant to me.
On a conclusive note, I strongly believe that it is more important to keep old friends than to make new friends. I think this way because of the emotions they have shared, help they made and the joyful memories they had with me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: CONTINUE_TO_REMAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'remain'.
Suggestion: remain
...n family members were not and they even continue to remain the same. They have helped me in situat...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ot contributed those finances, it would had been a neck wreck situation to me and s...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...es in our homes after school gets over. We even made fun of people we dont like. T...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ets over. We even made fun of people we dont like. There was a momentary situation i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35266821346 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31080004235 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461716937355 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3833913394 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.04 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.24 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306409709302 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105620124488 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165313746269 0.0737576698707 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229478166387 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17056620586 0.0645574589148 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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