It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends
There is no shortage of opinion on whether you should keep old friends or make new friends. But for me, I would definitely select to keep old friends. It is my firm belief that this decision will be much more beneficial. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will examine in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, having old friends will be helpful in many situation. Trust is very important thing to consider for making friends because if trust is there people can be very kind to us. If a friend if old then we can easily trust him/her as we know them from years. My personal experience is a great example of this. Once in my school days I did not told my friend that I am living this city permanently as I was worried how she will react. But I was very sure that if she comes to know this situation from anywhere else she would understand me instead of getting upset from me. For this reason, I would prefer old friends over new friends as new friends does not handle the situation smoothly.
Secondly, old friendship have very good bond which new friends may not have. Moreover old friends have more knowledge about you. Drawing from my own experience, in my school I had two friends in my eight grade. One was from standard fifth and other was from standard seventh. Due to my dance exam I was not able to finish my homework and both my friends was knowing this scenario, but my fifth grade friend did homework as she knew that I do not like to come school without homework. Therefore it is certainly clear to see that old friends have more knowledge about you instead of new friends as they know you from years and old friends would never make selfish decision which new friends can make.
Finally, old friends can even keep family members happy. In hard or emotional time of family old friends can help them to make calm and energetic. For example- my family was going through bad days due to my grandfather's heart operation and I was out of county for my job. One of my old friend reached the hospital and fulfilled my shortage, she did every thing which I need to do like cook the food and make everyone eat. If I had new friend which this situation might not have been handle so patiently. So I believe that old friends make you feel like famliy which new friends does not make you feel.
In conclusion, the issue of whether it is important to keep old friends or to make new friends is a complex scenario. Some have suggested that making friends will be helpful as we can know more and can be cosmopolitan. Nevertheless, I still contend that having old friends is advantageous as they can help you in any situation, they have good bond with you and even can keep your family members happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42574442182 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9724395933 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3461538462 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463657655075 0.236089414692 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167957197208 0.076458572812 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139676998632 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314135925039 0.150856017488 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518049113752 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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