It is necessary to be competitive in order to succeed in life.
Considerable controversy exists over whether being competitive leads to succeed in life. While some people worry about children might stunt from too much competitiveness and under unnecessary pressure. However, moderate competitions often play a pivotal role for people to become success. Therefore, I believe that being competitive in the early life contributes to a succeed life.
To begin with, being competitive since childhood can facilitate children to quickly adapt to this highly competitive society. Children who live a life of Reilly often fail to change their mindset when they enter the workforce, especially when children nowadays have to compete with not only people within country but from all over the world. If we do not let our children be prepared early for this highly competitive society, they will only find out when they realize the situation, which is not what we want to see. Thus, to address this concern, we should do our best to help our children become a competitive person for the purpose of their success.
For another thing, healthy competitions stimulate children to develop a habit of learning spontaneously. Some parents worry about that the overwhelming pressure brought by the competition limits children's desire for knowledge, since children would become exhausted after long hours of studying. As a matter of fact, healthy competitions facilitate children to learn naturally and even after the class, as the triumphs obtain through the competition is the best motivation for children.
Lastly, numerous failures during competitions help children to develop a fearless mindset, which is a key factor for a succeed life. While competitions seem as if only bring the failings, but it is worth mentioning that realizing how to handle failures properly is a good lesson for us to become mature. Many people who never have any failures in their early life often have trouble to in accepting what happened and adjusting to their normal condition again. Therefore, it is competitions that help people to see their shortcomings and offer people opportunities to improve themselves.
In conclusion, while some people believe that it is unnecessary to be competitive for succeed, I would still consider being competitive is an imperative process to improve myself and thus, to succeed in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, another thing, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, for another thing, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34782608696 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90853296971 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516304347826 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6636457238 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301688008985 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1376033994 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132589890694 0.0737576698707 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225372100128 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125219330987 0.0645574589148 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.