students should choose a university major that prepares them for high paying careers
Nowadays, many students tend to choose a major which is related to high-paying career. The main problem associated with this trend is that students might not fit for that major and end up suspending from university. I think that every major has its advantages, so the priority is for students to choose a major which they might want to study for many years. Therefore, I am of the opinion that students should pick a major which is what they really keen for rather than simply focus on the paychecks.
To begin, it is unquestionable that enthusiasm is a key factor contributing to the success. The idea lies in the fact that people incline to do what they want to do rather than what they asked to do. Imagine a person chooses a major that is not what he really wants. Then, when he faces with problems, he definitely could not persist on since without the enthusiasm it is bound to fail. It is hard for a person to accomplish any task when he does not enjoy what he is working on.
For another thing, with the rapid development of technology and industry, a high-paying job might not still have its superiority in the near future. To illustrate this, one important factor that many students cannot predict is the rapidly changing market conditions. Some industry may affect by unexpected factors, such as government's new policy or international situation, ending up relocating to other country. It should also be noted that students might even faces a situation of oversupply of workers when so many students with same major graduating at the same time.
Last, if every student only chooses some specific majors, society will faces a shortage of the experts in many pivotal sectors, such as cultural preservation and environmental protection. Therefore, to make sure human have balanced development in every domain, we should realize that we have to keep up the number of students in every major.
In conclusion, although students might be tempted by a major which could have higher paycheck in the future, it is wise for them to pick a major that they would like to get along with year after year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ng market conditions. Some industry may affect by unexpected factors, such as governments...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'face'
Suggestion: face
...oses some specific majors, society will faces a shortage of the experts in many pivot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, still, then, therefore, thus, another thing, i think, in conclusion, such as, for another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6811948269 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527472527473 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4400902933 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325099439447 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106712136606 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098274307011 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174217720381 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111743231798 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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