Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children
In the recent years the issue of whether or not we are living easier than our grandparents has received a great deal of attention from sociologists. Although some may say that issues like stress in these days life has made it more difficult than past times; I as the same as many others, believe that according to different development in technology and health care system our life is much more easier than theirs.
First of all, an important reason why living today is easier than past time is the technology development. Technology has made a lot of aspects of life easier than before. For example, expansion of community systems helps people to be in touch with each other easily, or different machines are doing hard jobs like mining, workers had to do in our grandparents’ time. In addition, technology is enhancing the efficiency of different jobs, modern methods of agriculture are good example for in this field. It is commonly stated that at the time that our grandparents lived, technology had not evolved this much yet, as a result, our life is much easier than theirs.
Another reason why our grandparents’ life was harder is that medical science and psychology was not as developed as it is now. One of the major problem that our grandparents had to deal with was health diseases. many experts say that there were less doctors than now and also medicine sciences was not like today, and there was not proper medicine for many illnesses; In contrast, now a days there is a efficient health care system in many countries. Furthermore presence of psychologists can help us to have better life.
Finally, it is occasionally said that life today is more comfortable than their time because more people live in big cities or well developed villages. In the past our grandparents were living in small cities or villages, in contrast, many people are living in big cities these days, and also rural areas are much more developed than their time. For instance, there is electricity, water and gas in every houses, but at their time they had to save water in reservoirs or use petroleum for cooking, and electricity was not as expanded as today. These amenity properties have made life more comfortable for us.
In conclusion, considering the ideas presented in the paragraphs above, I believe that our life is much easier than our grandparents' life chiefly due to different development in every aspects of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90291262136 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81635826568 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46359223301 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2866848898 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344466186023 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126113015981 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635446378906 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207042372647 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265059572109 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.