Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children
Controversy exists over whether there are more comfort and ease today than the time our grandparents were children. The developments of technology as well as improvements in people's lifestyle play crucial roles in providing far more enjoyment and comfort that people can experience nowadays.
The first aspect to point out is that today technology has drastically enhanced. It provides a number of amenities which were considered implausible to happen in the past. Take the case of high speed internet connection for instance. Many years ago, people who wanted to go abroad to pursue their academic dreams would feel resentful there. Not only could they see any of their beloved people anymore, but also it took months until the letter they had written got delivered. Today technology has progressed to a point where people communicate with each other with much greater ease. Furthermore, transportation means facilitates facilitating the rigors of living far from your family. Airplanes offer a safe and tranquil travel for whom those whose emotional ties keep them always worried about each other. For example, a mother can easily go to his son's dormitory located miles away from their home to instill determination and diligence into him and supports him to persevere.
A further more subtle point is that people's lifestyle has positively improved. Even though grandparents tend to recall their time as memorable and impeccable, people today benefit from modern styles. For example, in some countries it was a custom that newly-married couples have to live in the same place with the groom's family. The bride should had to assist them and had household duties. Children watched their parents always doing uneventful activities and felt pity for them. However, it is now a rudimentary concept that people have their own way of life and should live independently. Neither the society's rules, nor the things people feel forced to follow could disturb people's comfort. People's privacy is respected and nothing can make them do something reluctantly.
To summarize, life has become highly comfortable and easy for people nowadays due to the advances in technology and enhancement in people's lifestyle. Who can compare the difficulties people were dealing with many years ago with the enormous fun and enjoyment people are offered today ?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 315, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'grooms'' or 'groom's'?
Suggestion: grooms'; groom's
...have to live in the same place with the grooms family. The bride should had to assist ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241293532338 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.181592039801 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0870646766169 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0746268656716 0.046263068375 161% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0547263681592 0.0685040099705 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101990049751 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0422885572139 0.0351676179071 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75972775668 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0348258706468 0.0309702414327 112% => OK
Particles: 0.00248756218905 0.00188951952338 132% => OK
Determiners: 0.0671641791045 0.0887237588012 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0223880597015 0.0209618222197 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0149253731343 0.0139019557991 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2349.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 373.0 408.028673835 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.29758713137 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.396782841823 0.338922669872 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278820375335 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193029490617 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152815013405 0.112833075102 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75972775668 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616621983914 0.524397521467 118% => OK
Word variations: 75.445651512 59.2087087015 127% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7619047619 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.807573354 48.84282405 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 45.6439422954 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.24 1.45489161554 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204348280079 0.300154397459 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0410940608858 0.103427244359 40% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0326120024994 0.0752933317313 43% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.408253769011 0.497263757937 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141950182287 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672938267084 0.114077575197 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586714205035 0.0781384742642 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.299059698402 0.336927656856 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0950834333032 0.067059652881 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144825782312 0.210909579961 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408791318948 0.0618886996521 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.