Life today is more easier and comfortable in comparison to when our grandparents lived.
Controversy exists over whether life today is more comfortable in comparison to the past when our grandparents were children. As far as I am concerned, life is more comfortable than the past time because not only the quality of life has been increased but also, the development of technology happened. In the following paragraphs, I will pint point my case.
The first reason worth mentioning is that the quality of people's life is improved in the modern life. Nowadays, the number of hospitals and doctors is higher rather than in past years. People pay more attention to their health care and visit the hospital more often. In the past, in some parts of a country, there was not a hospital and if a person got a harmful disease, he would die. But, today people can find care facilities very easily and because of that, the knowledge of people is enhanced when it comes to diseases. Moreover, with more equipment, doctors have discovered more dangerous diseases and they also find their treatment. Therefore, a disease that caused the loss of many people in old days, can be cured by medicine.
A further more subtle point is that the advancement of technology offers a lot of options for people who made life more convenient. Today, development of the technology happening at a very fast pace and many discoveries have been made such as the high-speed Internet and mobiles. People can use the internet on their cell phones and video chat with their family members. Also, when a person goes abroad to continue his education, this video call assists him to feel like his family is near him which in the past days, was not plausible. Also, the enhancement of technology leads to the emergent of devices such as microwaves or refrigerators. People in the past, could not freeze their food since they did not have a suitable place to store it. In contrast, they could easily freeze their food and also warm it by using microwaves.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, modern life is much more convenient due to improvement of the human life and the fast pace development of technology.
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- TPO 7 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...rned, life is more comfortable than the past time because not only the quality of life ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70053336683 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1187559294 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245050298016 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074382027881 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115128158675 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172643360284 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121751003577 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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