Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to wor for company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Nowadays, many employees show an ever-rising interest in running their own business, hoping for gaining a conspicuous success in their careers. However, there have been some reasons behind this notion, and inevitably a few drawbacks associated with it.
First and foremost, the most explicit motive for why workers, whether full-time or part-time, aspire to be autonomous in their jobs is the issue of financial expectation. In Iran, for instance, the sizeable proportion of majority working for both private and governmental organizations have had a bare and miserable existence, making them promote this idea that if they had initiated their trade, they would have reaped a remarkably higher income than employment. Furthermore, another cause of this, which a huge influx of people showed interest in their jobs, would perhaps be the matter of mundane lifestyle. Even though in many firms they should work for whole daylight, they hardly observe any challenge in not only their skills but also their work environment and places, making them cherish their professional ambitions.
In the matter of shortcomings, the balance of work and life would be the prime concern among entrepreneurs. When they begin their professional occupations, the dogged perseverance and industriousness are the virtues that they should possibly take into account, ensuring their salary and products to be sold, thus it will undeniably erode their personal life since spending less time for family and personal demands. Moreover, health is another utmost important issue that is widely debated. Not only does it solely hurt health but it also deteriorates the conditions as well as their vocational performance as it damages their health if they adopt such a hectic lifestyle in the long run.
In conclusion, self-employment has captured people’s attention owing to the higher level of remuneration package and a more active lifestyle. However, there will be several negative aspects such as the work-life balance and endangered health for those who envisage their future prospects as entrepreneurship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49689440994 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99388063311 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627329192547 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8558009475 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.5 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159746371392 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640681420778 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458890310535 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101329016747 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435341016403 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 11.7677419355 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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