In order to stay healthy, many people choose to exercise. Some people tend to exercise individually such as running and riding bicycles, etc. Some people tend to participate in group exercises such as team sports. Which one do you prefer and why?
Needless to say that exercising is one of the most crucial activities among people to maintain healthy. Naturally, most individuals exert their abilities to gain a robust lifestyle. some opt sprots as their professional careers; while, others try to be far from sickness utilizing regular gym. May some assert that individual activities like running or biking is the best option for amatour athletes; Nevertheless, I am firmly of the belief that participationg in group is more effective for general people. The following underlying reasons are going to substantiate my standpoint.
The first fact that holds me this belief is that should human exercise with others, he will be more motivated. generally, people are inclined to their friends' and relatives' activities. hence, pursuing their manner is one of the previaling happening amoung people. Incidentally, when watching their friend is trying to keep himself fit by exercising, they will be encouraged to continue their schedule continuesly. In this case, my ex-colleage was going to body building regularly. Therefore, I asked some questions about thet and he explained that his friends and he had created a group to train together. Correspondingly, he invited me to go and what them exercising. watching that gave me an incredible motivation to begin going gym with them. We continued exercising for a year until he moved to another city. Acutally, he was the main reason for my constant training for a long time.
another reason which deserves some words here is that individuals prosper in sport in a short time. Initiating amatour sport is challenging and costing. Actually, in order to exercise correctly, people should pay for coach to educate them how to do some exercises to flourish. On the other hand, most persons start training without coach in order to save some money. participating in group can help them to save money as well as to do sport correctly.
For instance, when I decided to go to gym with my colleage, his friends and he teached me the correct way of training in gym without requesting money; hence, after a short period of time I perceived far-reaching changes in my fitness and it gave me more impetous to continue going to gym. So energitic was I that I did not want to stop my schedule. Had I payed considerable money to coach, I haved began to go gym never.
In cunclusion, exercising in group as a member of a team is more efficient. Not only do it has major impact on passion of people to begin it, but also it accelerate flourishing in doing sports
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, incidentally, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96736596737 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91792708003 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1500381232 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.24 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.16 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179813681725 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528993145352 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632735743347 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120663164744 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776764200738 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.