Parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their children’s future for them.
As is known to all, parents are always confronted with the problem that whether they should allow their children to make their own choices, thus making confused. Someone argues that children should be allowed to make decisions themselves rather than let parents determine their future. Although I concede as for the minority of aspects of our life, that parents make decisions instead might sometimes be useless. When it comes to the majority of life situations, it is usually really helpful. In what follows, I will illustrate my point of view.
Firstly, following parents’ advice, we can have a balanced diet and grow healthily. There is no doubt that what parents have experienced are far more than ours, therefore, they are more experienced in many aspects of life. I still remember the words that everyone would hear from their parents when they were small --“Do not eat too many sweets, you will have a toothache.” To be honest, in my childhood I did not really believe it and thought that parents might just want to scar me. However, when I grew up and went to school, I gradually realized that what they said is true after learning about the germs in the biology class. Our parents may not learn as much knowledge as we do, but they do know what is good for health or what is really harmful.
Secondly, take on a coat whenever they tell you to, there will be no bad for you. You cannot deny the truth that your parents are the people who know you the best in the world. Teenagers of our generation often do not willing to wear too many clothes. Obvious reasons, it is no good for doing sports and it is not cool. But I have to admit that every time when the weather got cold, my parents would call me and tell me to wear one more coat. And every time I did not do what they said I got a bad cold. So it may be necessary to follow parents’ decisions which are related to your health, because your parents always care about you.
Admittedly, when it comes to study, I think it might be better to make our own choices. Sometimes when we did not perform well in school, our parents might get mad at us and say a lot to us, but they do not get the point. But we know where the problem is, so it may be better to calm down and solve the problem yourself.
In conclusion, it is of benefit to children to let their parents make decisions often. Only when they grow up can they realize that parents always care about them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as for, i think, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43875278396 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30330238117 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478841870824 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9142433555 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5909090909 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4090909091 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255531236687 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08176866968 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125437271152 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17139789353 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149435724377 0.0645574589148 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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