People most respect the powerful not when they exercise
their power, but when they refrain from exercising it.”
Write an essay in which you develop and support a position on
the statement above. In writing your essay, you should consider
both when the statement may be true and when it
may be false
What is power and how do powerful people get respected? Could it be by exercising or
refrain from exercising it? Some would argue that powerful get respected by exercising the
power they have and others would argue that pussaint people get respected by refraining
from using the power. After examining both, it is certain that people most respect powerful
men who refrain from exercising.
Powerful people who exercise their power get predictable and people could foretell their
actions even before they do it and when they get predicted in such a manner by their
followers then they could loss their relevance and thereby leading to people not according
to them the kind of respect they deserve. For instance, a farcist boss who garrulously and
unnecesarily exercises power amidst his workers would end up losing his relevance and
definitely not be respected
Powerful people who refrain from exercising power get respected mostly because people
would not be able to predict their silence. For instance, A father at home who doesn’t
arrogantly skulk under the umbrella of the power vested on him as the man of the house to
make life hard for his family would in return be respected.
In conclusion, it is clear that people most respect powerful men who refrain from using their
power as seen in the case of the father at home in the instance giving above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 230.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0347826087 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49825648088 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491304347826 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.0875265884 48.9658058833 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.75 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.53405017921 375% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334989207518 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182309031741 0.076458572812 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664763328541 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13065508067 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877188486424 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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