As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to
think for themselves will surely deteriorate
Undoubtedly, our modern life is much more complicated than the past. this is obvious that noweday human depend on camputers, internet, robots and cell phones to solve their problems. Although we all use technology and this help us to have a comfortble life, is this mean that we gradually loose our ability to thinking and solving? In my point of view, I do not think so. I feel that way because of following reasons.
First of all, human have made this instruments such as camputers and robots to get high production which was impossible in hand working jobs. There is no doubt that invention of camputer needed to prepare to solve a lot of obstacles and hard works combined with curiasity and high level knowledge. Thus, how we can say using this products for problem solving will reduce our ability of thinking. For example we use calculators and this help us to calculate faster than the past but we all know how to calculate without calculator even we need more time for doing this. i remember when I took national entery exam for master degree there was a policy that we could not use calculatore. Although I always use calculator, I was able to solve problems by myself. So human ability never lust because of using a device which is invented by human. This device just help us to solve facing problems faster.
Second, technology solve our mathematical and theorichal problems but we can use this tools for solving problems releated with human emotion and interactions. For instence, if a person have problem with his or her boss the technology is not a good option for problem solving so he or she needs another aspects of human ability which is related with thinking, learning and communicatin. I had a lot of problem with my brother and I really wanted to have a good relationship with him so when I was think to soleve our problem I need to improve my behavior and have a excellent communication skills. I got good result because of thinking about my situation and I did not use any technology so we do not need this tools for every aspect of life.
Third, technolgy can help us to improve our knowledge and other abilities. for example we all use google searching for getting information. we all need internet for learning and reading new information. So, internet help us to get better thinking and problem solving abilities.
All in all, technologic advancment can not decrease our problem solving ability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...is much more complicated than the past. this is obvious that noweday human depend on...
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Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...le life, is this mean that we gradually loose our ability to thinking and solving? In...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...l knowledge. Thus, how we can say using this products for problem solving will reduc...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
... even we need more time for doing this. i remember when I took national entery ex...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... even we need more time for doing this. i remember when I took national entery ex...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...nking, learning and communicatin. I had a lot of problem with my brother and I really wanted to ...
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Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...ood relationship with him so when I was think to soleve our problem I need to improve...
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Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... I need to improve my behavior and have a excellent communication skills. I got g...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...rove our knowledge and other abilities. for example we all use google searching for...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ogle searching for getting information. we all need internet for learning and read...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, third, thus, for example, i feel, no doubt, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76777251185 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69245205789 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492890995261 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9299432723 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260637846948 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869405928222 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569267266737 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156288516724 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400937455539 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.