Some people say that computer has become easy and convenient. Others say that computer has made life complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
Computers have played a very important role in our life. Since we are living in 21 century no person can imagine their life without a laptop to do their day-to-day activities. Personally, I believe that computers have made our life easier and very convenient today. I feel this way for 2 main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
Today the computer is found in every house. They help us in getting the latest updates about what’s going on in the world. Not only in terms of gaining knowledge it has helped even a college graduate to prepare for this assignments. My own example is a compelling example of this. When I was in school I took part in the Science project. I was interested in doing some unique which was totally different from others. My only source of an extraordinary project was to choose a project from a laptop. I chose to do a project on Nanotechnology. When I logged in I was able to find abundant information on Nanotechnology. And many you tube videos that helped me in designing my project. It not only help in gaining information to write for my project but through videos I able to design it. I succeeded in my mission and received the first prize for my project.
Secondly, Google maps or printouts has helped me in finding my place while driving. Today every iPhone has a safari in it. iPhone is just like another walkie-talkie. We can say that today iPhone is like a computer which we can use wherever we want. Since technology has advanced there are many internet facilities on the phone too. When you enter a new city or state we often get lost. The only source of finding our direction is through Google maps which are readily available in every home. Now when I have moved to the new state I often get lost in the new place. Google maps are the only source for me to reach my destination.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that a computer has made my life easy and convenient to finish my daily activities. It has not helped me in finishing my project or find my destination through GPS. It helps us in getting the latest updates about news from all over the world. I has also made me smart and advance by learning new things in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...xample is a compelling example of this. When I was in school I took part in the Scie...
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...hose to do a project on Nanotechnology. When I logged in I was able to find abundant...
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...uter which we can use wherever we want. Since technology has advanced there are many ...
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...s about news from all over the world. I has also made me smart and advance by learn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50877192982 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65264275577 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478696741855 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9079796407 48.9658058833 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.0344827586 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7586206897 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72413793103 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100927028896 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282273860407 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441663118878 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706765305365 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032868932306 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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