Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teacher as a person who teaches their student different aspects of life which are important for spending time efficiently. View point of any persons comes from their experience and diary and communication with other persons. Teachers who are older than student and make their mind clear about their thoughts and beliefs should not talk about their political and social view point to student who still want to recognize world and make herself known about what is true or not. I will elaborate some reasons about my claim.
To begin with, no one knows exactly what is happening behind the politic if he was not politic man so, persons talk about politic just talk about their thoughts and guesses. For students who believe their teacher `s talk, would not good to talk about these unsure things. For instance, our totaliter government always wants to educate persons as soldiers for fighting to protect their beliefs and does not want that persons thinks freely without pushing them to the side that is true for it. As result all teachers are trained to educate students as the government wants and make a lot of persons that they think similarly. After forty years and with using social media people did not believe the government beliefs anymore, which was whole lie and they started to make their idea as they want.
Furthermore, if teachers says about their view point which is already so true and wise, that may have bad effects for students who do not have much experience in their short life, which the most bad effect comes from misunderstanding which the students make them. I explain it with a personal experience, when I was eleven my teacher told that there is no heaven and no hill after death, I believed a lot to life after death so, I thought my teacher is crazy and I did not accept all his beliefs and even all the lessons that he told us. I got very terrible score for his lesson. But after few years I read some books about that opinion and after second thought I figured out what he wanted to say us. Therefore that would be better if he does not say about these view point which was too soon for us to know about them. Consequently talking about view point from the teachers is so risky for students.
To put it in nutshell, I disagree with the title that teacher should informing students about their social and political view point, which could make similar person with similar thoughts and also, may have bad effects on their life.
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...ut that opinion and after second thought I figured out what he wanted to say us. ...
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...so, may have bad effects on their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, second, similarly, so, still, therefore, as to, for instance, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6797235023 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25822086358 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472350230415 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.1584058311 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.9375 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219389450103 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843441651061 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703271517822 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180504207639 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656137047877 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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