Question:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Exploding of information adds complexity to life in 21th century. It is simple for people to find tons of info online or offline. At the same time, they also drowning in the sea of information and lost track of their life. Consequently, it is obvious that a better way to plan and organize young people life could have make their life better.
Firstly, ability for plan and organize can help young people have a clear goal of their life. One of the rising problems today is that many young people are unsure about purpose of their life. They are either confuse about what they are going to do in the future, or they do not know how to achieve that goal. Advices from their parent and from internet not only cannot help them get a better idea of their life, but also make the decision harder to make. By learn the ability to organize their life, however，they can reflect from their own experience and interest. Therefore, they can find a path most suitable for themselves.
Secondly, this ability can also help them to live a stress-free life. Modern life can, arguably, generate much stress to the people especially for young people. Logically, they will need to deal with relationship with their friend, parent, and many other people, and to balance their social and academic life. Thus, it is of significance for them to track their life. By planning their life in advance, there could have come less unwelcome surprises that could cause potential depression for them. Things as easy as writing down schedule on daily base can result in a relief from upcoming life. Moreover, they can be more prepared for future event, so they can be less stressful. To sum up, it is not surprise that living a modern life can be stressful and complex. For the sake of the future of young people，education on help the acquire the ability to plan and organize is essential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 828, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...uture of young people，education on help the acquire the ability to plan and organize is ess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70948012232 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50370018609 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510703363914 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9609340854 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0526315789 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243785831477 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966592013233 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649200298427 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188577304266 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270085756577 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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