Some cities think that a way to limit pollution and congestion is to tax drivers heavily who drive into the city each day but who live elsewhere. What do you think about this policy? Do you support it? Why or why not? Use specific reasons.
I have a contrasting viewpoint regarding the statement that limiting pollution and congestion is to tax drivers heavily who are not from the city. There are the following reasons for my belief:
Firstly, Property prices in the city are sky high, and ordinary salaried people can't buy a house in the town, so, they purchase property in the countryside; also some people who don't like the city lifestyle and want to be close to nature also opted to live outside the city. These people do daily up down to their offices which is mainly in the downtown area. If we tax these people, then companies will see an increment in resigning rate of employees, as paying taxes will decrease the saving of the employees, and they will try to take a job near their houses.
Secondly, the countryside has only the necessary shops but for purchasing other items people have to come to the city, if the tax were imposed then people will not come frequently to the city and decrement in the market footfall will be observed which is not at good for either business owner or government. Also, the travelers who come to visit from another country usually rent cars to explore the places around, but due to imposed taxes, they will be motivated to skip that city, which results in less foreign currency reserve, which ultimately affects the country's GDP.
Suppose, if the business capital New York City imposes a tax, then the city's revenue ultimately decreases as property in the city is not affordable, primarily the New York income comes from business, and the recessive footfall will impact business owners.
To conclude, it's better not to impose a tax on drivers heavily who are not from the city and to decrease pollution, the government should focus on implementing a circular economy instead of eliminating cars from the road, and hi-tech road infrastructure will reduce congestion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87774294671 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58004966674 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564263322884 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.10990533 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.5 100.406767564 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.875 20.6045352989 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156691833485 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077662580255 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542968299415 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102447296771 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465989787691 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 11.7677419355 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 58.1214874552 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.1575268817 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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