Some people prefer to live with a roommate.Others prefer
to live alone. Compare the advantages of each choice.
Which of these two options do you prefer? Use specific
reasons to support your answer.
Everyone has their different opinion and liking some would like to live without roommate and others would prefer that.
I have known people who prefer to live because living alone gives a lot of privacy, a sense to introspect easily, and a preference to do anything in the room at any time. Living alone is equally good and provides a very flexible itinerary.
Although I prefer to live with a roommate, living alone can make you homesick, and when it gets to accumulate, people tend to lose their concentration. Roommates are very helpful, and we can share anything we are holding I our mind, and by sharing thoughts, we feel light. There are a lot of work either in a big or small apartment while moving in or out; there are always heavy stuff that tags along with us, and moving them can be toilsome unless you have a roommate with whom we can do it for free and efficiently. Moving on, with roommates, we can divide our day-to-day work, which gives more time to spend on personal activites, and who likes to cook and clean the house/room every day?
Nevertheless, with roommates, we have to make certain compromises, which is fine because we cannot expect to get everything we desire in real life. It also creates a disciplined environment that can help us out in our future life. My roommate has a habit of sleeping at 11 pm, but I am a night owl; we turn off the light always at 11 pm, and I have to use a night lamp to study; in the starting, I got irritated; consequently, I slowly get adjusted. Apart from it, I don't miss breakfast as my roommate used to wake me up, and this helps me to fulfill my daily calorie count.
In conclusion, I prefer to live with a roommate, and it's always good to have one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, nevertheless, so, while, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43670886076 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60242821052 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566455696203 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8062630276 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256073592503 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104550844876 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967333075346 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174548881448 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075191256061 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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