Some cities think that a way to limit pollution and congestion is to tax drivers heavily who drive into the city each day but who live elsewhere. What do you think about this policy? Do you support it? Why or why not? Use specific reasons.
I have a contrasting view point with respect to the statement that to limit pollution and congestion is to tax drivers heavily who are not from the city. There are following reason for my belief:
Firstly, Property prices in the city are sky high and it is not possible for an average salaried people to buy house in the city, so, they purchase property in countryside; also some people don't like city lifestyle and want to be close to nature also opted to live outside the city. These people do daily up down to their offices which is mostly in downtown area, if we tax these people then companies will see an increment in resigning rate of employees, as paying taxes will decrease the saving of the employees and they will try to take job near their houses.
Secondly, countryside has only necessary shops but for purchasing other items people have to come to city, if the tax were imposed then people will not come frequently to the city and decrement in the market footfall will be observed which is not at good for either business owner or government. Also, the travelers who come to visit from another country usually rent cars to explore the places around, but due to imposed taxes, they will be motivated to skip that city, which result in less foreign currency reserve which ultimately affect country GDP.
Suppose, if the business capital New York city will imposed tax then the revenue of city ultimately decrease as property in the city is not affordable, mostly the New York income come from business and the recessive footfall will impact business owners.
To conclude, its better to not impose tax on drivers heavily who are not from the city and to decrease pollution government should try to focus on implementing circular economy rather then eliminating cars from the road and hi-tech road infrastructure will decrease congestion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82704402516 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50692052687 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534591194969 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.079121072 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 219.285714286 100.406767564 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.4285714286 20.6045352989 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 5.45110844103 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142772376472 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783936197789 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049106887493 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952678786258 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425996761256 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 11.7677419355 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 58.1214874552 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.1575268817 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.247311828 234% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.