خIn some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a
good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
there are a heated controversory over whatever is it proper for students to have jobs when they are studying or not. As far as I am concerned, the advantagoes of having jobs outwieght its disadvantagous. To shed light why I have this view, there are tow main reasons, should be discussed in the following essay.
To begin with, populs who have part time jobs are more indepents than others do not have jobs. To be more specific, when they obain money, they are able to use it whatever they want. Therefore, parents can not order them how they should spent money. For example, since I was in high shcool, I worked in the resturant 6 hourse every week. Thus. I went to trip with my friends in the summer by own money or I could buy a ubdate labtab for myself. But if I never work, I could not done any of them.
Turning the other argument why I have this oppinoen, they use better times. It is crystal claer that when they are free maybe they go out with improper frineds as a result they become disobey and do wrong stuffs. On the other hand, when they have a shortage time, they try to use is in the best way. For instance, as I mntiend above, I was working in the restorant. Because I had not quit a few times, I had a perfect plan not only did I succfull in my lessons, but also I done my jobs well.
As a result, nor did I wasting my time during school.
To sum it up, with all into account, I subsctibe to view that students have part time job because not only are they indpent, they learn how to use time more benefitila as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19932432432 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30906910417 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5594057889 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6875 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187055715965 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643652979487 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537820120494 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102418185933 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545072055604 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.08 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.