Some high schools require students to wear uniforms, while others allow students to choose their own attire.
Which do you prefer, and why? Use specific examples to support your opinion.
For most of the jobs, dressing special clothes and uniforms is a routine. Doctor in a white dress, police officers in police uniform, workers in job suit, and so on are examples of uniform dressing. They use them as protection, identification or just to be clean. Schools try to follow the same path. But for different points of view, the goal of this requirement could be different.
Schools utilize this concept to teach students to “don’t judge a book by its cover”. This might be one of the main reasons. They try to cover the gap between different classes of society; the gap between poor and rich. Maybe some parents couldn’t afford to purchase fancy clothes for their children. And of course, discussing someone’s clothes could be annoying in school. This can affect students’ personalities. So, they are unifying clothes to let students focus on their education rather than their appearance.
On the other side, some people believe that this is just an escape rather than finding a solution to the real problem. You will be judged by your appearance in the future, they say. Students should learn to attend to their clothes. But almost all of the students economically aren’t independent. They can’t improve their economic situation during school.
Also, some people say that schools should teach students how to accept and handle the differences between people. Students should understand that weaknesses in some people are not their fault. And if somebody doesn’t have those problems, he or she isn’t perfect. They should learn to help each other instead of humiliating. Although this is a good point, this requires a lot of time and effort for schools. So they rather choose the simple way and require students to wear a uniform.
During the mid-school, I had the same experience. At first, even this simple routine caused some of us few problems. However, after a few months, we were used to them and we almost forgot that we were wearing them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... to attend to their clothes. But almost all of the students economically aren’t independen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99093655589 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63057173089 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583081570997 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0439829007 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.5384615385 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7307692308 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88461538462 5.45110844103 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241343451584 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065573633231 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512035614886 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132722456666 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513550004887 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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