In some cities, public transportation is a reliable way to get around. Do you prefer to travel by public transit or by using your own vehicle? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Cities are developing rapidly and demand for the proper transportation system becomes more essential. Most people live in places that have a far distance from their workplace. So they have to commute to work every day and return home. This causes traffic jams in highways during rush hours. On the other hand, the crowd of commuters who are waiting for a train or bus is a pitfall to public transit. Some people choose to travel by personal vehicles and so do I.
In most countries and cities like the one I live in, the transportation system is not proper to use. Because in some cases they only cover small districts of the city. So you have to walk a long distance. Also, sometimes their schedules are not accurate and you have to wait for them to arrive, even more than an hour. Sometimes they arrive and wait in the station to gather more passengers. As a result, some people who can travel by cars don’t care much about public transportation.
Of course, traveling by public transportation could decrease air pollution and could be helpful for global warming. Although, when people don’t support this kind of transportation, they won’t be able to improve fast; some people say that this is not our problem and the government should take care of that. They just don’t want to waste their precious time until that moment. Some of them even don’t trust the improvement of public transportation only by using them. Thus, they ignore this solution and continue to travel by using their cars.
I travel to work on my motorcycle. Because if I want to use public transit, it will cost me too much and won’t be economical for me. Even more, it would take me more time. So, I would prefer to travel on my vehicle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sportation system is not proper to use. Because in some cases they only cover small dis...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...continue to travel by using their cars. I travel to work on my motorcycle. Becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, kind of, of course, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68092105263 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58075720263 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555921052632 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6387773216 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7619047619 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4761904762 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211551812656 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615706618884 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547011545139 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130429805708 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144823865128 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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