some people believe that the Internet provides them with a lot of information, while others believe that access to much information creates problems? which do you prefer?
Recently, the world has become very technologically advanced; the most important invention is the Internet. Some people believe that the Internet is not a significant invention; however, there is a substantial body of evidence that casts doubt in this belief. From a personal point of view, the Internet is a fantastic discovery, given that it has a positive impact on transportation, communication, and education. Below I will strive my supporting points in more detail.
The first and foremost point, The Internet has a significant impact on education, given that it opens the door to a wealth of information. A vivid example that can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above is, schools in California implement the usage of the Internet in all the learning subjects. Furthermore, this approach broad students’ horizon and maximize the potential learning outcomes. Consequently, the Internet has a vast benefit in the education field.
Next, coupled with Internet education, better communication is another benefit of the Internet. In the past, there was no Internet, and people all over the world could not contact each other easily. However, the Internet has made the world a global village. The Internet gives people the ability to access many Apps such as WhatsApp, and Viber to communicate with anyone at any place in the world; moreover, it is cost-effective. In addition to that, almost all people who access the web have social media accounts. Either on Facebook, Twitter, or Instagram. They connect their friends through means of "liking," "sharing," or "comments." Therefore, internet communication has made sure to connect people from two sides of the earth with no problem at all.
Although the previous points are the first ones which cross the mind at a glance, they are not the only reasons available. There is another subtle point that must be born in mind. The Internet has made transportation easier than before. Provided that people use data connection ability such as GPS to navigate their destinations, they can get where they need to go. Moreover, people can use the Phone App such as Google Maps to know the traffic condition and find the best routes to save time and gas. A recent survey conducted by the University of Toronto found that the Internet has reduced commute time drastically, which enhances people's quality of life. As a result, the Internet has vast benefits to our world.
Taking everything into consideration, without a doubt, the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. It is suggested that research and technology continue to develop and expand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23653395785 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16435303197 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 13.0 3.08781362007 421% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1816875383 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1666666667 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7916666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217337978078 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555011000856 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517484632521 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117915180835 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387674244237 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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