In the past several decades, the world has gone through massive changes. Nowadays, more and more people have abilities and time to pursue their dreams than their predecessors. In this regard, the debate over whether people should follow an ambitious dream rather than a normal one is still fierce. In my opinion, I firmly believe people should to follow a realistic dream.
Admittedly, some may suggest that a ambitious dream motivate people to achieve more, and it is ture that there are a few cases that people who prusues an amibitious dream achieved success and becomed famous worldwide. However, people tend to ignore some points that significantly contribute to these abovementioned cases. Their success consist of privileged socioeconomic backgrounds, competent coworkers, and a little bit of luck. All of these factors make these cases being hard to reproduce. Therefore, as an average person, a realistic dream is more rational choice.
Moreover, an unrealistic goal may frustrate us. During following the dream, people inevitably confront with setback. If they set too ambitious goal, these problems may become untouchable and hopeless, which works against their self-confidence. Consequently, their dream will dampen their motivation and hinder them from further achievement. On the other hand, people who sets a realistic goal are more likely to get what they want through continuely hard working. According to a recent study conducted by Harvard University, researchers have shown that fifty-eight percent of interviewees considered a unrealistic goal would bring excessive presure for them.
Last but not least, choosing a realistic goal does not necessarily mean achieving little. As an old saying goes, " Success is only achievable by passing a ladder step by step." Once they achieved their goal, they can reset a new one and pursue it again, thereby, to obtain an excellent success.
In a nutshell, it is a undoubtedly a wiser choice that pursuing a realistic dream rather than an ambitious goal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39308176101 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91215513355 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625786163522 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6310435325 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2777777778 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23357805977 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777342443204 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558593417368 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137080405164 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454349923775 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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