Some people prefer to live with a roommate.Others prefer
to live alone. Compare the advantages of each choice.
Which of these two options do you prefer? Use specific
reasons to support your answer.
Everyone has there different opinion and liking some would like to live without roommate and others would prefer that.
I have known people who prefer to live because living alone gives a lot of privacy, sense to introspect easily and preference to do anything in the room at any time. This is good and provide very flexible itinerary.
Although i prefer to live with roommate, living alone can make you homesick and when its get accumulated people tend to lose these concentration. Roommates are very helpful, and gives a person to share any thing we are holding i our heart and when we share our feeling we feel light. Their are lot of work either in big or small apartment, while moving in or out there are always heavy stuff that tag along with us and moving them can be a ruckus unless you have a roommate with whom we can do it for free and efficiently. Moving on, with roommates we can divide our day-to-day work which gives more time to spend on personal activities and who like to cook, clean the house/room every single day?
Nevertheless, with roommates we have to make certain compromises and that is absolutely fine because in real life we cannot expect to get everything we desire. It also creates a disciplined environment which can help us out in our further life. My roommate has a habit of sleeping at 11pm but I am a night owl, we turn off the light always at 11pm and i have to use night lamp to study, in the starting i got irritated consequently I slowly get adjusted. Apart from I, I don't miss breakfast my roommate used to wake me up and this thing helps me to fulfill my daily calorie count.
In conclusion, I prefer to live with a roommate and its always good to have one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, nevertheless, so, while, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46474358974 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51698495512 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8541624816 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.083333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260354472548 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105297350656 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106051888063 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180960462679 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067976477998 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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